Score: 10

"Nice."

submission: Above

date: June 30, 2008

Love the synths. Great melodies. What version did you use for this song? I use fl 5, 6, 7, and 8. Very uplifting track dude, just made my day :)

Mind checking out my latest trance track called midway? I would like to hear what you think about it.

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Score: 9

"lol."

submission: [DjBjra] Cheesy Pop Song Demo

date: June 30, 2008

Nice, but vocals sound somewhat weak :P

Keep it up.

Score: 8

"Cool."

submission: Axel F Remix

date: June 30, 2008

This is a very nice remix. Great synths too. The only thing is that you didn't really create different melodies to really make this somewhat original. If you had changed up the melodies and added your own I would give you a full 10. The drums overpowerd some of the synths especailly the snare, might wanna turn that down a bit to hear the more important synths. Otherthan that, nice job. 4/5.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/154885, just a small calming techno track, would like to hear what you think about it.

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Score: 8

"Cool."

submission: {Serenity}

date: June 30, 2008

Really wierd synths you got here. The sound sort of has that wave, but it sounds good in a way. I like that squeare synth but the melody needs to be a little bit more diversity because it really had only 1 melody. I like the drums, good job with them. 4/5. Keep up the good work.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/154885, some techno thing i made, sounds good so far. Would like to hear what you think about it.

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Score: 8

"Headbang."

submission: Crooked Laugh--_--

date: June 30, 2008

This is definately a headbanger. The intro was a somewhat of a buld up, sort of jazzy like in a way. It would've been great if it had a longer intro with some wierd sfx going here and there. Some pads would've been nice in the background to fill it out. Here comes the headbanging part. Wasn't really a great pull there, needs to be more pulling so that the listener would stay interested. For that part the drums were a little bit plain. More hihats would've helped and maybe some low toms coming in every 2 beats to add some variety. Around the end i really like that swing/reggae feel, really cool.

Overall you did a really nice job. Keep up the good work.

Score: 9

"Nice!"

submission: [Solitude] (Mastered)

date: June 30, 2008

Very cool song here. For the overcompression stuff going on, try not to have any compressor in the master channel, in fl 8 there's always fl limiter in there so you should turn it off if you haven't allready.

The piano could've been turn down a bit and the attacks were harsh. The bass needed to be a little bit smoothed out because it hurt my ears a little when it came in the beginning.

But other than that this song is really catchy and has a cool feeling. Good job, keep up the good work. 5/5, :D

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Score: 7

"Not bad."

submission: :KA: Liberty (USD)Rmx/Rmst

date: June 29, 2008

I like the melodies and the instreuments you used. This has some good potential.

You really gotta look out for the over compression. A lot of the synths were overly compressing each other which made the song cluttered, which makes the song sound somewhat annoying. The bass was one of them, and sence the bass isn't relaly the most important thing in the song, it really needs to be turned down. The snare had some compression in it to, and when it had that roll you couldn't really hear that melody sence it was over it, it's suppose to be under the melody.

The drums could've used more diversity. Needs some hihats to filter out the piece and maybe a ride to fill in the kick. Some other percussion like toms and such would be nice to add in more of the trance feel.

If you fix the over compression this would sound a lot better and make a whole lot for the track. 5/5. Keep up the good work.

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Score: 7

"It's ok."

submission: /BBQ\ -- Unreal

date: June 29, 2008

The synths could've been better. Like having the bass had more bass in it and the melody synth have some delay and some reverb if there isn't allready. The piano didn't really sound good to me also because you used the fl piano and that piano doesn't sound somwhat original and just doesn't sound right. The song is pretty neat, just need to work on the synths and a bit more on the melody. 4/5. Keep up teh good work.

Mind checking out my latest trance track? I would like to know what you think of it.

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Score: 9

"Nice rave!"

submission: Beginning Trancemission

date: June 28, 2008

Really nice here. Very raveristic :P There was some bass in here that seemed a bit offed and it seemed as if it was dragging, not really pushing the track. The dru,s were good, could've added some more hihats and maybe some rimshots too add a little more diversity. Overall, really nice track.

Mind checking out my latest trance track? I would like to hear what you think about it.

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Score: 8

""Original" :P"

submission: Your Eyes (Original Mix)

date: June 27, 2008

This is definately original. Not like those other fast pace songs, and the similar arrangement in most of the professional trance songs. My only real critic is that cheesy choir you used which i've told you allready :P And during the breakdown the piano solo was somewhat too long. It would sound a lot better if you had a plucked saw synth with having a similar melody but more trance like, with a filter in the beginning of the melody then getting louder with a pad coming in then the second breakdown for the bass into the main part. The piano was really beautiful, but it just sort of lost my attention of the ending if you know what i mean. Good work on this, probably not your best, but definately something to work on for your greatest. Keep up the good work. :P