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This is nice dude.. really cool saw synths.. or what ever they are called. Really liked the filters with the synths.. making it really varied. Keep it up dude.
Tranece 4or eva!
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Fun to dance to.. but it doesn't really have a good progression. You just mostly have the melody playing, repeating with different synths. No wonder it's not much cause you only worked on it about 2 hours ;P
Seriously though, take time on your songs. And trust me.. it really helps :)
5/5
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm gonna throw some awesome proggressions into any future songs I amke.
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This could be an ok song.. but you way overused the fl presets. There are so many people out there who uses the same sounds like the ones in the song. And the drums were to weak and sounded ok.. but not that great.
Some of the notes were off as well.. especially the piano.. the notes didn't seem right together.
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This is the kind of stuff i really like to listen to. Has that racing sort of feel and yet it is still calm. Nice arpeggio stuff that goes along the bassline.. really nice touch. Keep up the good work man. Favorited.
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Great job on this.. good catchy tune and smooth to listen to. Something i'd listen to late afternoon-ish. The progression was good.. the guitars sounded good.. real nice. There was this odd spot though around 2:30 that it just stopped.. i had to skip about 10 seconds in order to hear the next thing.. try and becarful with that cause i though it was over. It would be nice if the bass was a bit louder as well.. just to fill out the mix. Keep it up dude. 5/5
Mind returning the favor on my new (demo) song? http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/163255 ... Thanks
Author's Response:
We just noticed that the bass WAS too quiet, or that small spot with no sound would be base. =/ thanks for the advice! We will really fix that! I love your review. :D and I will check out that song of yours.
-Dan, HRM
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Cool tune you have here. Everything seems to flow well with eachother. Only problem i have is that you used a different type of synth for that main melody.. i would've prefered something like a square synth like all the other ones.. but that's just me. Nice job overall.. keep it up. 4/5.
Author's Response:
im assuming you mean the saw that comes in at 1:00
i actually went through many squares but i liked the saw more.
thanks for the good review
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Catchy stuff you got going here.. this would sound a lot better if you used real instruments.. just sounds a bit cheesy ;P
Nice work.
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Really love this ambient dnb type of style. I really liked the synths you used.. you used them well ;P
Keep it up dude.
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The intro was quite wierd.. like most of your songs :P I would also like some pad-ish stuff in it too. There was a little bit of glitching with the sliced up voiced .. but it's ok. I kind of agree with zenon as well cause the drums were to plain.. not a lot of variety.. not a lot of percusion.
Anyways.. great stuff man. And also you gotta start making different types of basses sence your overusing (atleast I think so) the same bass. :P
50th voter ;P 4.40 / 5.00 (+ 0.014)
Author's Response:
Awesome man!
Like i said with ZENON there is like loads more variation in the finished version.
Thanks for the review man!
Conor
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Your melodic trance stuff is great dude. But your mastering really needs work. The bass is over powering the melody.. especially the drums. What ever your using for the master channel to master this.. try something new because it doesn't seem to be working for you. If you make this song smooth instead of everything cluttering together.. it would sound amazing. 5/5.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Haha - I spent about 30 mins - 1 hour mastering this song... I'm not too proud of it (usualy spend 4-5... 8) . I am going to release a fixed version eventualy, because as you said - the base is powering over everything. I also want to fix the first lead because it sounds silly.
thanks for the review!
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